All womenAre skinny And weak
And have long hair
And pretty
And have children
All men
Are muscular
And strong
and handsome
And have short hair
And have children
Women do chores
And men go to work
Women like men
Men like women
All one society
A "perfect" society.
1per·fect, adj \ˈpər-fikt\
This is not perfect.
WOW, Solana, such an intense feeling emanated from this feeling (in a good way). The things you wrote are painstakingly true stereotypes, and I feel like the line breaks you used worked really well adding to the tone of the poem. Also, I love the ending, it sounds so strong. Amazing job.
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ReplyDeleteI really like adding the definitions into things recently so..yeah. ;)
Thanks again!
This is an amazing poem!! :) I like how you included the definition of perfect. It wrapped up the poem nicely.
ReplyDeleteI think this poem is really cool and unusual. It's raw, and it just says what has to be said. There's so much that isn't included, and you really just have to interpret it the way you choose to. It's a really interesting style, and it's pretty far out there. Great job!
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